Story Notes
Add your overall notes about this scene here: what it needs to do, the genre conventions, the value shift, obligatory moments, etc.
Draft 1
Paste your first draft here.
Draft Notes
What did you learn from this draft? What needed fixing?
Feedback
Feedback received on this draft.
Draft 2
Paste your second draft here.
Draft Notes
What changed and why?
Feedback
Feedback received on this draft.
Draft 3
Paste your third draft here.
Draft Notes
What changed and why?
Feedback
Feedback received on this draft.
Draft 4
Paste your fourth draft here.
Draft Notes
What changed and why?
Feedback
Feedback received on this draft.